Hello,
I would like to show you the three startings of my story that I talked about nearly a month ago here they are.
Starting one.
"Today we have a news flash, two people calling themselves Harold and Emma are walking through the park, they have the word elegance shining around them. They say that they own the Cloud Bank, but there's no such thing as a cloud bank is there?" "IS THERE?"
Starting two.
"I think we should have children" said Emma.
Milk and cereal got spat all over the table. "Wh... What" stuttered Harold.
"I said I think we should have children because we're getting old and as a matter of fact I think we should have twelve of them."
More milk and cereal got spat all over the table.
"No."
" Yes."
"No."
"Fine then we put up a help wanted sign."
"No."
"Then we elect our highest rank member president?"
"No."
"Yes."
"No".
"Yes".
"No".
"No".
"Yes".
"YAY".
"Fine", said Harold "we'll have twelve babies but only only twelve okay"
"Okay".
Starting three.
"Why are you reading so much stuff about babies, try reading about comics like me" said Harold king of the cloud bank. "Cause I'm pregnant" said Emma queen of the Cloud Bank."Plus there cute". "How many how soon" said Harold. Twelve and on December 25th" "AHHHHHHH" said Harold "Now we have to decorate for Christmas and the baby in two weeks and name them AHHHHHHHHH". Harold started panicking and scrambling around the room.
It's okay, I've already named them, there names are: Harry, Harison, Hayes, Hikiam, Hikiam, Herbert, Hugh, Chris, Charles, Hubert, Emily, and Karl". "Great Let's do it"
Question of the day: Which one is your favorite?
Tuesday, September 29, 2009
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I like #2 the best :) Brilliant :)
ReplyDeleteI like the 1st start. I grabs you up front so that you want to read more.
ReplyDeleteI like nuimber two also, there is a human side of the main characters and the humor is present but not overt. Nice.
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